Tuesday, September 8, 2009

"Journal #1"-Response to Mrs.S

Dear Mrs.S,
I agree with you on the ideas part, sometimes I notice that my ideas in my writing aren't as strong as they could be, and this year I hope to get my ideas clearer than clear!! Like you said I could make my my arguments stronger with incorporating sources, and I agree, I'll try to do that more this year. I'll work on improving my ideas:)
Thank You.

Destrie

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